Analysis & argument
Identify gaps in reasoning, weak use of evidence and conclusions that need stronger support.
EDITING · POLISHING · FEEDBACK REVISIONSYour ideas, refined.
Your ideas, refined.
Your feedback, addressed.
Editing and improvement for IA, EE and TOK coursework. Work on analysis, structure and academic expression, or bring your teacher’s comments for focused revision support.
Share your draft, teacher feedback and school deadline to discuss a tailored scope.A COMPLETE VIEW OF YOUR WORKKnow what your
Know what your
review will cover.
Discuss these three areas with us. Your quote will specify which checks and revisions are included for your draft.
Structure & language
Review paragraph order, unclear sentences, repeated points and inconsistent subject terminology.
Technical checks
Check calculations, units, figures and references where relevant to your subject and agreed scope.
FIND YOUR COURSEWORK
01 / INTERNAL ASSESSMENTMake the analysis
Make the analysis
do more work.
Your IA needs a clear connection between the question, the approach, the evidence and the conclusion. The focus is on the specific needs of your subject and draft.
- Research focus and the logic of the approach
- Calculations, data presentation and interpretation
- Depth of analysis, limitations and evaluation
- Mathematical or subject terminology and written clarity
- Consistency between your results and your conclusion
02 / EXTENDED ESSAYA clear question.
A clear question.
A sustained argument.
An EE needs to hold together across the whole document. Review how your research question, evidence and reasoning connect, while refining the expression of your own ideas.
- Focus and consistency of the research question
- Organisation and progression of the argument
- Quality of the reasoning and use of source material
- Paragraph structure, academic expression and terminology
- Citations, bibliography and presentation checks
03 / THEORY OF KNOWLEDGEGo beyond
Go beyond
describing the example.
Make the reasoning behind your examples visible. Keep the discussion connected to the prescribed title or exhibition prompt, with clear perspectives and carefully developed implications.
- Focus on the title or selected exhibition prompt
- Links between examples and knowledge questions
- Development of perspectives, analysis and implications
- Object context and the purpose of each example
- Coherence, precision and economy of expression
TEACHER-FEEDBACK REVISIONSYou have the comments.
You have the comments.
Let’s make sense of
what comes next.
Bring the draft and the feedback together. We can discuss the changes needed and how to address them within your remaining time.
See the teacher-feedback revision service ↗Understand each comment
Identify the passage, calculation or argument your teacher is referring to.
Turn comments into specific changes
Agree on which issues need clarification, additional analysis or a structural revision.
Review what has been addressed
Compare the revisions with the original feedback and discuss any remaining questions.
FROM YOUR CURRENT DRAFTOne project.
One project.
A clear scope from the start.
Whether your draft needs a focused revision or substantial attention, discuss the whole task before work begins.
Send the context with the draft
Have your subject and level, assessment session, current file, teacher comments and school deadline ready.
Confirm what will be addressed
Agree on the editing work, the format of the returned materials, the timeline and the full price.
Review the changes against your brief
Compare the returned work with the issues you agreed to address. Discuss remaining questions within the confirmed follow-up arrangements.
COURSEWORK QUESTIONSBefore you
Before you
send your draft.
Is this only a proofreading service?
You can ask about reasoning, analysis, calculations and structure as well as language. We confirm the appropriate scope after reviewing your materials.
What if my teacher has already given me feedback?
Include the original comments and the version they refer to. This makes it possible to track whether each issue has been addressed.
What will I receive?
Agree on the deliverables before payment: for example, an annotated draft, prioritised revision notes or a copy showing suggested edits. The quote also sets out any follow-up support.
How quickly can the work be completed?
Share the school deadline, including your time zone. Availability and a realistic delivery date will be confirmed before the project is accepted.
How is the price worked out?
The scope, subject, draft length and time available determine the quote. All agreed work is listed together so you can make a clear decision.
YOUR NEXT STEP
Let’s look at what you need.
Start with your subject, your current work and your deadline. We can discuss the right scope from there.
Send your subject and deadline for a fixed quote.